The Introduction

You may wish to compose your introductory paragraph after writing the rough draft of your paper, as it is sometimes difficult to introduce something you have yet to write. The introductory paragraph is important for the over-all effect of the paper. The purpose of the introduction is twofold: to get the reader's attention and to state the thesis. There are various ways to get the reader's attention:

Begin with a relevant quote which will lead into the thesis.

Example:

In 1896, Baron de Coubertin of France thought the revived Olympics would give peace "a new and strong ally."

Begin with a short story which would provide background for your thesis or would exemplify your thesis.

Example:

In 1896, the Baron de Coubertin of France saw one of his dreams come true-the revival of the Olympics after more than a thousand years.

Begin with a contrasting opinion to build interest.

Example:

The Olympics have evolved into a political struggle, not a sports competition.

Begin with a question which would lead into the thesis.

Example:

Are the Olympics a true competition of athletic abilities?